I've spent the last
15 years of my life
relying on friends and family
but in just a short while
that will all change
and i will be free
I can go where i want
with whoever i want, and
till whenever i want
no more relying
on my family and friends
i can depend on myself
without bothering anyone else
i guess when you think about it
i'm not that free
i wont be able to go very far
only one passenger at a time, and
i can't go anywhere past curfew
there goes my freedom
but.
when I get my license
its still going to be great
besides
i still need a car.
1. I think it should be longer, but i don't know what else to add?
2. what can I do to make it better?
Wednesday, December 9, 2009
a time my world (will) change; v.1
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I think you can make it better by showing more than just telling us that you are going to get your license. And you could probably add more details.
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